I still don't remember who wins though...

I never remember who wins.

I wouldn't want the bath in the middle of the bedroom. I like my bathing done in private.

all right 

 Ditto.... and I always wonder about condensation etc...

I kind of remember it - very tacky place 

 Hi Pengy Is it finished?

You're so practical.

 I just don't want a damp bed

 Hi Pengy Is it finished?

What was the subject of the poem?

nah   it's due Thursday (my exam)  but whatever I produce she hates to I don't know why I'm stressing about it 

nah   it's due Thursday (my exam)  but whatever I produce she hates to I don't know why I'm stressing about it 

It's a bit old fashioned...

there's 2 of them - one is called The Memory box about a mother passing things on to her child as she dying and the other is called an Irish Wedding 

I like your themes.

 She sounds horrible. Do you want me to set Baz on her?

That guy should have got some false teeth before appearing in this!

that's putting it mildly 

The commentary bit at the end is how you've developed as a writer through this course - I have had to stop myself on many occasions saying I've finished the course without any tutor input and that the course hasn't developed me as a writer  - it promised so much and delivered so little - they should be done under the trades description act for declaring it would help writers when it doesn't 

The commentary bit at the end is how you've developed as a writer through this course - I have had to stop myself on many occasions saying I've finished the course without any tutor input and that the course hasn't developed me as a writer  - it promised so much and delivered so little - they should be done under the trades description act for declaring it would help writers when it doesn't 

That must be so infuriating and disappointing for you.

Is there somewhere you can leave feedback on the course, once it's finished?

They looked decidedly underwhelmed

They looked decidedly underwhelmed

there is but they don't tend to post the negative stuff   it's been a very expensive waste of my time 

married to his sister????

I don't blame them.

Mr Yogi has arrived home and announced, "We've already seen this one". 

there is but they don't tend to post the negative stuff   it's been a very expensive waste of my time 

married to his sister????

Tell him to sit down and stop moaning