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It might look cute and simple, but don’t be fooled; the puzzling platform action of Toki Tori 2 is as challenging as they come! Explore a colorful island full of obstacles to overcome, animals to befreind and treasures to find when Toki Tori 2 comes to Wii U.
Getting to grips with the basics of Toki Tori 2 couldn’t be simpler. After all, Toki Tori the chubby chicken only has two moves – a whistle and a stomp on the floor on top of being able to move left or right. And yet using these moves in the right place at the right time is the key to exploring every inch of the island you’re on.
With no text or in game tutorials to distract the player, Toki Tori 2 instead lets the player experiment for themselves when trying to solve the various enviromental puzzles. Each creature on the island reacts to TokiTori and his abilities in a different way, so its up to you to use those reactions to your advantage. Summon Berry Bugs with a whistle, scare Bubble Frogs into spitting bubbles with your stomp, move Hermit Crabs to act as platforms and much more Do your best to figure out what affects your powers have on the environment you never know what you might find!
Practise makes perfect! Mastering these reactions is the key to success, but it’s only part of the solution: you also need to work out how each reaction interacts with other creatures too. This makes the puzzle action of Toki Tori 2 far deeper than it first looks, with the game delivering an immensely challenging yet incredibly satisfying style of game play.
The fun doesn’t end once you’ve completed the main game though: thanks to Toki Tori 2’s built-in level editor, you can make your own stages to play whenever you like. Use the Wii U GamePad touch screen to drop elements straight into the environment, than refine your creation with precise taps of the stylus and make a level that’ll keep you and your friends coming back again and again!
Toki Tori 2 also allows you to play using either the TV or the Wii U GamePad screen, meaning you can transfer the action to the Gamepad and continue playing even when the TV is in use.
- Absorbing puzzle platforming action with gameplay that’s simple to learn, but challenging to master.
- Explore the island environment and learn how its inhabitants react to Toki Toris presence: scared, curious and much more
- Use these reactions to help you overcome obstacles, solve puzzles and find all the goodies hidden around the island
- Create your own levels using the Wii GamePad touchscreen – add blocks, animals and other elements with just a tap of the stylus!